This was a good story, a story that i would of liked to of known more about, but as a poem it had a good flow to it and i liked it very much, so good job, 5/5, thanks for reading my poems as well

Great poem, It rhymed really well.. I enjoyed reading it. 5/5.
Bec xx

This was good, you told the story well and the ending was expressed particularily well xxALLYxx

A stroy told by poetry are some of the best stories...and thats what you did and it was amazing. nice job.

Emma 5/5

Cool, really interesting, there's always a whirlpool of sentiments pulsating our hearts and minds and this poem projects it well.

Awesome poem, sounds so real and very interesting

Lovely friendship poem. It was very understandable to read and i think you are a brilliant writer. keep it up :)

Really sweet. A pretty lengthy poem and you maintained interest with a great flow

Sondos

Awe that was such a uplifting poem! it really shows the light at the end of a tunnel! I loved how you put so much of your personality in the poem. I can tell you weren't writting to please anyone but yourself, But in the process you wrote an amazing work of art! Just a little somthing to change at the end

And we both realize now, will we be there for each other till the end.

i'd make it "and we both realize now, we WILL be there...."

Awesome write! Keep it up!

Awe that was such a uplifting poem! it really shows the light at the end of a tunnel! I loved how you put so much of your personality in the poem. I can tell you weren't writting to please anyone but yourself, But in the process you wrote an amazing work of art! Just a little somthing to change at the end

And we both realize now, will we be there for each other till the end.

i'd make it "and we both realize now, we WILL be there...."

Awesome write! Keep it up!

I really like this poem keep up the good work

This was good. I could really feel your deep emotion put into the words with much effort. Keep up your good work.

Aww a very happy ending for lost love. I like all the examples you used to prove your point! Good job!

Aww lindsay, sorry that ur still thinkin bout david, he still annoys me sometimes but since you left I haven't really talked to him except on the occasion to fill him in on you and tell him to call you or e-mail you so as to lessen my work load :P

But I still am sorry, as always a 5/5 for you, I see you have a lot of friends and you get mega comments so cudo's ... wish I could get that much ... *sigh* lol jk jk but still its a really great thing, I think the student has surpassed the teacher if you know what I mean lol
well ttyl
Love ya 4eva girl
Mia

Good poem, abit sad but None the less it was really good.