Through the Tides

by Juls   Mar 12, 2006


Through time I have learned
We never go away from the lies
We all seem to beat through
the tides
Time after time

Those lies still there
When we think we had it defeated
Still there...Still there
Still seen by the human eyes

Once then twice..three times
even more
We all break down from the lies
All the lies
Life goes on unsure

Through time we feel the destruction
That these lies have on the body
Have on yourself and people
around us in society

Fact not Fiction
These lies will build
Ever to get away?
Broken down to rumble for sure?

Chained like prisoners
In a jail cell called life
One by one the lies come in
Ruined..forever ruined is my life

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Fantastic poem def a 5/5 keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Bug1219

    Hey! girlie that was awesome! i still love reading ur poems! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    Your poem is really expressive and easy to relate to, and I'm not sure exactly how many people would be able to put a really good insight into life and our society today like you did through the poem, especially in such few words. I really like your poem :)

    -kelsie

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Such a true poem - I agree with Natalie -
    'Chained like prisoners
    In a jail cell called life'

    Is an excellent combination of lines :)

    Keep up the awesome work.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    W00t I'm impressed. I love this poem! Yep, looks like our world is full of lies. Unique to write about it. An especially in such a beautiful way like you just did. Left me speechless =) Well done!!! =)

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