Awww thats so cute!!!..yet sad..... lifes so messed up these days..it really sucks...sorry

I can definitely relate to this poem....great writing, rhyming and use of words. i love it completely! 5/5

Hey nice job... keep writting....

::MELI::

*crying and searching for a tissue* OMG!!! that was soo sad!! *cries some more.....* Awww!! Is everything alright? ((I know it's not, but it's just a silly question...)) If ya want to talk, i'll listen...just message me if ya want!

Here 4 ya!
Amanda

Hi
im just so happy that theres someone on this site who is a BOY....a real boy with a heart broken soul. so am i. everyone keeps on saying boys dont hav hearts and im like...LOOK OVER HERE!!!!!! a boy with a heart, and with words as lovely as you have used...will be happy in the long run. happy, really really happy. a girl broke my heart...in a very very bad way. i think the same thing happened to you too. its sad...but we will one day find someone whom we love...and they love us so much theyll neva let go...they'llo treat us like kings...and theyll be our queens...
anyway lol if u can read a few of my poems n temme how they are...i'd love to know from a poet like YOU

Oh this was so great. I just loved it. Amazing job. Great poem. It was just so so sad. I hope your doing ok. And just remember. Some day you will find someone who appreciates you. Great job. Keep it up ;)