Awesome! It sounds like it could be in an episode of Law and Order or something. Please tell me that its not based on a true story....?

Soz 4 your loss, if this is true, my boyfriend was murdered 9 mnths ago,
so I can sort o relate to this poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Very nice poem, the sadness is very heartfelt...but like many other poems I've commented on, the capitalization and punctuation needs some work...otherwise great poem

Wow depressing i like it and i really like the angel part, and despite what you may think you are good at putting your opinion and feelings across
love lorna x

That was really sad... where do u get all this inspiration from?? very well written.. as usual.. keep writing hun..

Much Love,
Ipsita

Wow hun... absolutely phenomenal!! i don't remember reading about your sister's murder.... so i'm guessing this isn't based on your life? (at least, i really hope not) stay strong and take care hun *hugs*
-xXx-

Good story... liked it... 5/5

::MELI::

Well done love! I'm sorry I havent commented back, I've been dealing with alot lately, and commented taken a back seat to everything in my life.

Poem: Well done, I think though you should go back and add puctuationa nd capitalize your I's lol..

Other News: Welcome to the Bowl, thankyou for joinning, I'm so happy to have you aboard! Uh a few things I ask of everyone a) read the welcome message please and b) fallow rules of both the club and the site.

I'm sorry I'm kinda getting yelled as I write this so please exuse me

Jenn

Oh wow, this is really an amazing piece of imagination dear, i hv just never read any poem related to this matter and i hv been here in this site for months now, so that definately makes u and ur poem unique.

good piece of work here
all the best and take care
5/5