Paint the Silence

by Juls   Mar 15, 2006


Let it be noticed
Shine it through the light
Paint the Silence
Unlock all the sound
Live longer in sight

Be noticed don't blend in
Never to be put
on the back burner
Thats what we want in life
Isn't it?

Give yourself a name
Stand proud with the one you hold
Don't be shy
Shine like the light
through morning musk

Paint the Silence
That you hold
Come clean of all your impurities
Sane will still hold
Be noticed in this world

Thats what we want isn't it?

Be painted in this room of silence
Pure Silence that is
Don't hold your tongue
We have free speech in this life
So paint it...don't give in

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  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Great poem!! Freedom of speach is really important nowadays. I've never really read anything like this poem. It was really good. And, I liked how you asked questions. Like.. "This is what we want in life, isn't it?" ..Really good job! Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really like the way you worded this poem. great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliantly writtren peice, very well put togeter and very clear

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Excellent, reminds me of keeping feelings in, a bad trait of mine . . .

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    O I love this poem! So wonderful. Loved every part of it, and I really enjoyed reading it. You're so creative, the way you play with just words is amazing.

    Lotsaaaaaa love
    -xxx-