Wow, Jeff,
This was beautiful,
I loved it,...it was so touching, and deep....and i think eventhough you say you cant sing...you can only rap...i think you should give it a shot and record the song,..because it would make such a good song... i loved how it sounded as i read it out loud... wonderful !!!! Write a new one soon... keep me posted!!
-Hugs-
Ashley

Well, I'm sorry, I can't sleep,
I'm sorry that I'm in love with you,
I'm sorry, I can't sleep,
I love you, why can't you see

Humm, why be sorry that your in love with someone? Its not like its your fault. You cant control your feelings toward another. Nicely done Jeffrey.

-Jennifer

Overall Rating: 4.4/5

Wowo amazing lyrics...great stuff wow keep it up.

lissa