To love, but not loved in return

by Jessica   Mar 16, 2006


You see his smile and your heart
Beats like hundreds of drums
You hear his laugh and you feel
You could live forever
You see him cry and you feel your
Eyes fill with tears
And then you see him loving another
And you heart knows
It can no longer go on

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Awesome......:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Aww i thought it was gonna turn out good but thats soo sad. very creative though. ur a GREAT writter keep it up 5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    All i must say is that to go through it quickly for mistakes, for example you wrote "you" and i think you meant "your". I also think that if you added some sort of rhyme scheme, it would feel much more powerful. Other than that i really liked your concept! Keep it up!

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    P.s. i really liked this! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Wow, to have your heart broken is something no-one should have to go through, but still it happens, every mimute, of every day!

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