I lyk the bit how it says You canâ??t even lay a finger on it
For fear of destroying the beauty, its true lol...love dia mwaz xoxo

Hmm really nice.. keep writing

Aw really beautiful its so true too i have never seen a snow flake until last year lol i thought it was te most beautiful thing ever. yeeaa anyways amazing poem. btw thanks for the comment means so much.

Hey! u write great poems! i neva thought of snowflakes in such a beautiful way!

Aww thats cute :) nice poem 4/5

Aww that is such a great poem. You described everything very well in this & you chose your wrods perfectly. It really kept my attention. You did a great job on this! I loved it!

A gorgeous way to describe snowfall! I could picture them falling and settling one by one, and then stopping leaving a white blanket over everything.
Lovely write. Oh you may need to edit because you have strange characters in the middle of a word "canâ??t."

I'm commenting on this poem because one of the ones you requested I have already commented on.

Aw wow. Snow is so cool. Tehe. There were some errors in this, But there just site errors. A really good write though, Really beautiful. Tehe. Keep it up =P 5/5

`taleee xx

Nice work, im gunna get older poems cuz i read almost all of urs that i can since i cant read love/friendship poems. gr8 work, so much detail!
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Really nice imagery. I love winter, only because of the snow fall. I detest the cold.

I liked the first half better than the second. The first was devoted to poetic description, which was great. The second was devoted to telling the reader what they were supposed to think about the images.
"And you know
You shall never see
Anything so beautiful again"
Your use of the 2nd person is too demanding for this poem, in my opinion. I'd switch to the 1st or 3rd.

I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite – most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future. If you like trees you can read a poem I wrote called – The memory of my shadow. The poem Searching also has a nature theme - I wrote this way too long ago when I was a kid and have thought many times to rewrite it as an adult. But somethings are better left the way they are no matter how badly you wish to change them.