Thast super cute!!!!

A great poem from a great writer :)
Keep it up... I feel so the same, but im a though LoL
anyways 5/5
Take Care...:)

OMG!!! I wanted to cry!! sadness!!
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I cant stand be alone
I just don't know what to do
I miss hearing your voice on the phone,
And just hearing you say..i love you
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favorite stanza
Wonderful job, David!
Take Care Please!!!
!SuNSHiiNe!

I love how u havent given up on her true love nvr dies even when the other person has give in/up. You are one of the top 5 strongest people i kno..i kno its hard but way to go.

I am sry that shes still not lovn you but love her when he leaves her and you'll be hers soon..jus be there for her again and agian thas rly all u CAN do.

Sooner or later it'll be like shes seen u for the first time (if u kno wha i mean by tha) and she'll remember everythn and how you were there for her even when she wasnt there for u.

Tha is the key to be their for her when shes not their for you, which isnt made to be easy but if u want her u'll keep it up. I believe in u and u got this. Good lucck..amazing and deep poem one of the best better and better.

Lissa

Oh I love this poem. Its fantastic. And so very sad. It really touched me. Thanx for the comments on my poems. Means a lot to me :)

That was wonderful! It was truly a pleasure to read...Your writing is an inspiration to others..Great job! ;)

Hey this is long, but i only realized this after completing it..so it was worth it.

very nicely penned
great poem indeed

all the best and take care
5/5

I think i read this b4 but i cant find ur other account maybe u can comment to me using that account and then i can check it out..but rly good poem vrry touching...keep it up.

Lissa

OMG IM BACK YAY, i missed this site lol, especially your wonderful poetry aww, this poem in particular just the first verse of it is amazing awww, wonderful hun, takecare,xxoo

Wow...you went pretty deep on that one didn't ya david... i really liked this one. i could totally relate to this one. i really can. i still have that feeling though too...and it won't go away. remember that taylor dude i was telling you about...yup...all becuz of him. anywho...great poem. i really liked it. 5/5
...+...kortney...+...

This poem was very deep and I have gone through some of the same things in my life. That touched me very deep.