Comments : Not Mine

  • Kaylee, what a poem, that was great penned! well done.

    Knowing so much about it all
    only goes to prove one thing,
    Today's Truth may not be
    true for tomorrow.

    gloria's glen

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a great poem about sacrifice, which is the greatest love. I love it

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    How awful, not the poem, that's how it made me feel. The idea of someone relying on you, but you not really wanting it at all. Sounds like some relationship gone wrong, romantic, friendship or family relationship. Sad poem, but portrayed well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    So original - a brilliant write - I think you have finished the poem perfectly :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Great poem. Different then most on here!! Totally loved it!! Full of emotion!!
    ~~Sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Different, but i loved it. well done
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by DavidBrendan

    This poem makes me feel so guilty of any time I should of done something. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    I wish that i could of been there!....but nice writting!
    ~*Linz*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    This poem was kind of mysterious kaylee. I like these
    Kinds of poems that you should read more than once
    To get the meaning. I liked the style of this poem. I
    Mean after two lines, you wrote “Not my……”. That
    Made the poem even better.
    Much love,
    Marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    I cant get over your poems
    all of them are SO deep
    and they send shivers down my spine
    this one
    was a work of art
    purely and simply ingenious

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    Love your work.... so young to be so emotionally strentghten. You are interesting.. I will read more of your work...

    Let it flow...

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    It was a lot different to what i usually read but that's what made it worth reading. I really love the way you set it out and chose your words carefully. Well done, keep it up! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    Amazing poem
    it's diffrent but that just makes it alot better :) keep it up :)

    ~StefQ

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem is really good. very deep and i loved it! 5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    That's really touching and heart warming. I loved it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    This is beautiful. Almost made me cry at the end just because its so amazingly true, simply put but wonderful anyway.

    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice poem very deem there's lot of thought in it keep up the great work thanks so much for the comment. 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wonderfully written.. I loved how it was so short yet the last lines to each verse really made you think.. beautiful.. and thank you so much for your comment on me poem it means a lot to me

  • 18 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    OH MY GOD! I'm speechless, I have NOTHING to say! OMG! AMAZING!

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I really like this. good job. i really understand what this means.