Comments : Supermarket Fantasy

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Superb write... Your talent is so evident in this piece. Shame you have to leave our club *sigh*... I'll keep a tab on your work and check back often :)

    I enjoyed this read, it was very rich and refreshing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I really laughed out loud on this one Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    I enjoyed it.....gr8 job

    luv,
    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by mkml

    Hah. I love it, funny poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Montana

    Hahahahahah omg that is freakin funny.. ur good

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie

    Funny poem. Good work on it. Its superb =3 ^^

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  • That creative poem, lol....

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh Holly, this is great! So cute and funny, awesome job! ;o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kare

    That was a very good poem, i like it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Holly ,
    Ahahaha I love it girl !
    I am sooo glad you joined in our craziness ........lol

    I betcha when people first started reading this in the funny section they were saying " OMG ".......lmao

    I love the creativity within this poem .
    I just loved it ! Holly ! or should I say princess Holly .....LMAO

    Anyways glad to have you within our club for a few days .....even though I missed the last day .....(boohoo)

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Holly! very creatively done. had me in splits!

    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by sweet girl!

    LoL
    I THOUGHT THIS PEOM WAS FUNNY AND VERY CREATIVE I THOUGHT IT WAS THE BEST YET

    GOOOD JJJOOOBBB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Timeless Hopeful

    Damn Holly,

    I loved the way, you created a story about daydreaming in the shopping mall. This is truly a great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by xox.erika.xox

    Brill poem. lol. i luved it! erika xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    "Sitting there
    anticipating my move
    eagerly awaiting to
    be freed from the
    constraints that bind"

    ^ so me! love the poem. great idea! i have a feeling most people on this site can some what relate to this poem, especially the women! extremely well done and very cute.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Nice poem. =]

    I saw your post in the myspace
    group, so I figured I'd check you
    and your poems out. =]

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    "Quixotic Desire (Collaboration)"

    Wow, beautiful collab! The flow was absolutely breathtaking and the wording, just perfect! Incredible poem!