Comments : Have a Little Fun

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awwwwwwww that was soo cute! it really tells what being a kid is all about..haha i did most of that stuff when i was little! i loved this it was just to cute!

  • 17 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    For Some Reason, When I Read This, I Thought That There Was A Two-Headed Meaning To All Of It. I Thought Maybe Along With Telling Kids To Have Their Fun, You Were In A Way Side Stepping Towards The Consequences That Come Along With The Fun. But I Don't Know. You Tell Me.

    -Darrin

    Another Great Poem By The Way

  • Lol That Was Really Cute, I Found It Exciting To Read, You Know How You Look At a Poem And Cant Wait To Read The Next Stanza? I Felt That When Reading This Piece...I Think It Was Brilliantly Fun...Keep Writing
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo 5/5