Comments : WaLk AwAy

  • 11 years ago

    by His Firecracker

    I think its good. it pretty much describes how i feel about my ex bf.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    You sound kind of confused. You say how he never crosses your mind but how you miss him. A little bit of confusion. Other wise..good job hunn..*

  • 11 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    This is a great poem.... so the only thing I would change is chance to tries... it rhymes with eyes... but the rest is perfect... loved it... reminds me of... well u kno...lol 5/5

    ::MELI::

  • 11 years ago

    by ***Living the life***

    I like it alot it's so nice I just would change chances to tries cause it rhymes and makes sense, but I really like this poem and your other poems too.

  • 11 years ago

    by Katelyn Boudreau

    I thought it was good
    -katie