Erm . . wow! That is an awesome poem . . of course lol. It has so much meaning behind the words - and all the deep lyrics, another poem to almost make me cry :) Excellent work, and I can't wait for you to make a book!!! It had better get published xD

Peace. [Sole]

The second stanza reminds me of a lot
I love the repirition of ' are you listening' - it emphasises the feeling of being ignored
brilliant again =]

Hmm i think you need to work on the last line in the first stanza. but ... 5/5.. creativity is good.

~David...
P.S.. sorry its taking me so long.. im jsut swamped and i have dial up.

Very nice poem here. its so sad, and so full of emotion as well. i loved these lines

I need to talk but....what words do I choose?
How could words....fail me for the very first time?

i can relate somewhat to this poem, *hugs* keep your head up and keep on smiling hun!

A great write! So emotional and I like the repetition of "are you listening?". Awesome!

Wow. I love the spontaneity of your verse. This is what poetry is all about.....it is alive....
raw..... I hope everything worked out for you.
(come comment some of my stuff if you want....)

I really liked this. I think everyone asks that question, "Do you hear what im saying" This poem kinda reminded me of how i feel towards my mother, So it meant alot. Thanx for expressing it in poetry, I enjoyed reading it! =]

natz x0x

Great job, your lines are touching and easily related to. Try to make your poem flow better. Keep it up

Geez, i love ur poem....this is great!! 5/5!!! i hope things are going great wit u now!!

Wow, its so sad but nice use of words, and well written. xx

Really powerfull! it does mean something to me, reminds me of my two ex's, how one lured me away from the other whom i loved more than anything, how i lied to her about it all, and becuase of just one man, lost the person i cared about more than anything.. but in the end, im the only one to blame, and just makes me think of what id like to say to her, how im sorry, but shes no longer listening, i really blew it..........