Ann, that was beautiful, as always.. but I have a question. (Being as un-teenager-ignorant as possible,) At the end of the third stanza, did you perhaps mean "too"? Well, either way, it is BEAUTIFUL, just like you!
Ann, that truly beautiful penned..."We know the sun comes out again On a world that's fresh and new, And all the gifts we freely give Somewhere, sometime accrue. We know sometimes we have to wait For life to come around, And sometimes that it won't, but still There's some good to be found." take care.
Dang!!! Girl, Your pen so full of passion
and rhyme in this poem it read with a visual
playing so vivid in my head, I wanted to be
that guy and just hold and hug you forever.
You have a wonderful gifted talent in writing
such true heart felt poems. Thank you for sharing Ann and Write On,