Comments : Forbidden Love

  • 12 years ago

    by Linsey

    This poem is truly if not the best poem I have read today. Any girl or guy could relate to this. Comment mine : )

  • 12 years ago

    by Luke

    Soo Much Love And Emotion.. With A Good Structure and Good Rhymes.. Well Done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Ann, that was beautiful, as always.. but I have a question. (Being as un-teenager-ignorant as possible,) At the end of the third stanza, did you perhaps mean "too"? Well, either way, it is BEAUTIFUL, just like you!

    Love you!


  • 12 years ago

    by dora

    Beautifully written. great j0b a t0uchng write. keep it up

  • Ann, that truly beautiful penned..."We know the sun comes out again On a world that's fresh and new, And all the gifts we freely give Somewhere, sometime accrue. We know sometimes we have to wait For life to come around, And sometimes that it won't, but still There's some good to be found." take care.

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Ann, beautiful penned as always from the heart, still remember what i've told you..? i'll comes again! ;) hugs.


  • 12 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    I loved it. simple but the message was so clear.

    kind regards,

  • 12 years ago

    by Randee

    This is really good, i know what you mean too. i gave you a 5. if you get the time, check out my poems and stuff. thanx

  • 12 years ago

    by Seductive

    Nice poem, love the concept, u should check me out. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dang!!! Girl, Your pen so full of passion
    and rhyme in this poem it read with a visual
    playing so vivid in my head, I wanted to be
    that guy and just hold and hug you forever.
    You have a wonderful gifted talent in writing
    such true heart felt poems. Thank you for sharing Ann and Write On,

  • 12 years ago

    by creeesta

    This is a lovely piece. It's also very true. I enjoyed it very much...xoxoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by Tammy

    Ann, another beautiful, touching write.
    Your heart was well written.
    Take care!

  • O my gosh i cant stop readin ur poems lol i luv it

  • 11 years ago


    I loved this! And as sad as it is, I can relate. Great job!