Fantastic poem take care hun sarah x

I can't say this enough, your poem are all so emotional and they always seems to suprise me in the end, this one put a smile on my lips and made me feel good inside, I wanted to be there with you, to feel happy, but the ending brought me back to reality...I am amazed, honestly!!! I bow my head for you, you are so talented...Love you hunni, I am here for you...

Much Love >sabrina

Whata touchign poem...
i was wondering where you were going to end this persons fantastic day...now i know.
it truely is a great poem. i even smiled while reading it. i never catch myself doing that...
well hope all is well for you

Again fonominal job

Wow! that was excellent.......so touching and powerful.......5/5

keep it up!

What a great piece of imagination here, just loved it.

Beautifully xpressed

All the best and take care
5/5

Gr8 poem!! it brought bak sooo many memories!! i reeli missed been a kid n i wuld do nething to bring bak those times. its soo true...ur poem, that wen we grow older, u get more and more things to worry about and then all u do is worry. reeli nice poem.
tear....LoL
xoxo take care hun luv ghazal

You are very talented. the imagery you use helps me see the whole poem

This is beautiful
Your so talented,, I wish I could write like you

5/5!

--Jasmyn

Great poem. Great job!!

Aww.
vivid imagery, lady. perfection.
beautifully sad, to say the least. 5

That was amazing

Beatful, extreamly uplifting, but then theres a darker side at the end that i love...its a great contrast 5/5

This poem has touched my heart and yet mad me realize some things. Its very inspirational. you are very talented. God Bless You!!

Hey I loved it, keep it up :) 5/5

So good
touching
the rhythm was great
xxxx
abby

That's so pretty...yet sad.

I love this poem. It reminds me of all the rough times ive been through

This poem is absolutely beautiful. it almost makes me want to cry because it seems as if those happy days are over. my favourite part is No ones around
I find I'm alone
But I'm happy
It's better than home
very well done keep it up, i really ejoyed it

Wow this was oviously written from the heart.