Cry Me Away

by Sora, The Lonely Poet   Mar 22, 2006


Tear Tear.
Cry Cry.

Is that all I can do.....
Since the tragic of you?

You broke my heart that day.
So you just cry me away!!!

This is my broken heart.
Love, It destroyed me.
Love, it deceived me.

So why this, why this now?
That isn't it.
Love isn't it.

It's something deeper, something new.

What? What thing could take over me than the thought of losing you.

But, wait......that fear has already been realized. So what is it now?

It rains.
it pours.

Yet nobody snores.

I've figured out what is wrong.

Everybody's gone.

No more.
No more.

So I can say, Cry me Away.

Because that's what will happen anyways.

So, go ahead , my friend.

For me it is the end.

I will die this very day, so cry me away........................................

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sora, The Lonely Poet

    As i say, thanks for the tips!

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    The start was really good but mabey try sticking to the same idea all through rather than just running off with your thoughts, they were alll nice but didnt fit togeterher so well ALLY

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I see the thought behind it. and some of the sections are good. but like Kaylee said, it lacks proper organization. btw the way i like the tragic couplet, but the words into flow better.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    To tell the truth I didn't like it. The flow wasn't too well nor was the organization. It just seemed like a bunch of ideas and some things just didn't fit. It had a nice start but then just ended up being words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Latasha

    I like this poem keep up the good work

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