Engagement

by Brittney   Mar 22, 2006


For the first time in my life
a true smile is on my face
pure happiness upon my heart

youve given me this
and said \"its only a start\"

you aksed for my hand, and placed on that ring

my heart soared above the skies
and my sould did sing

that diamond glistens in the sun
and its a reminder to me
that your the one

so baby lets go
and make history.

-brittney dawn long

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  • 11 years ago

    by Erikah

    I LIKED THIS POEM ALOT; YOU SHOULD PUT A BETTER RHYMING SCHME IN IT, BUT OTHERWISE; I LOVE IT!

  • 11 years ago

    by purva bhatia

    Good job...

    nice write

    purva bhatia

  • 11 years ago

    by Micky

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    Love
    micky