Comments : Sunset over Lake Erie

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Woowwww! this is fantastic! i love the way you described it in the poem without naming it anywhere.

    it would have taken me a few minutes to derive what you were saying if i'd missed the headline!

    lovely once again.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    Beautiful poem, I agree with the Shobhana, I like how it was ambigous about the exact place but the setting wow, definatly brings you there! I don't know if that made sense but it did in my head lol

  • 18 years ago

    by happyGIRL

    I read it. i donw wat to say.