Lmao this sounds lyk me not really only the bit about talking n the test lol..but not getting expelled...nice work..love dia mwaz xoxo

Great work! 5/5

Thanks for the comment on mine too!

Chelsey

I like this but I don't think it's as good as your more serious stuff. I've added u to my favourites now because I admire your work.

Hmm an interesting poem for sure i like how it tells a story of change and is rather humorous at the same time. a good write 5/5 :)
~jacob

This poem was pretty funny. It made me smile, and on alot of it I can agree.

Though, before they started casting me aside, I used to be the best student. I didn't like breaking the rules. And most of my original teachers knew I'd be the last person to break them. But now the teachers at this new school think I'm crazy.

-shrugs- I don't know. But I liked this poem ALOT. Good job.

-Artimis-

Haha theres al0t 0f ppl 0ut there like that ;p if its tru, im glad uve lifted ur game haha ;p
great p0em 0nce agen
l0ve maddy x0ox

Lol, very very good. This is my favourite. it flowed nicely. great work!
-Suzie J

Well I'm glad they managed to turn things around in the end. I was taking this very seriously at first but then I realised it was a funny poem...so I'm assuming this isnt about you...reminds me of some people I know....was a very entertaining poem.

Few errors: 'I'm a person you likes talk'
did u mean 'who likes talk.'

and in the first stanza 'poised'

Apart from that certainly made me chuckle...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

This was a very good poem. I liked the subject matter it was very original. Thanx a lot for your comment on my poem. The ending was my favorite part in the entire poem, everything in the beginning came off as the child didn't care then at the end they changed and the student changed into a good one. Nice job. It was written very well.