This poem was alright, not as good as the others I've read by you though. It was very specific and I could almost picture it in my mind. Keep your wishes, and your dreams, for they are guides to the inner you.

Great use of imagery here, again an inspiring messagae, very impressive work, keep it up and good luck in my contest!! xx

I love it very good again you have a way with words creating a scene great job

Well done, its well written, as good as your others and just lovely. well done mate
xxxx

LOVED it. My ultimate dream world.. you painted the perfect picture with words!!
Hope to get to know you!
=) take care
sarah-joy