I Love You

by Monique   Mar 27, 2006


**I wrote this with a friend of mine (male) so its written in the guys point of view. A romantic guy.. not just any guy could come up with this, haha.**

I want to hold your hand
I want to be with you
But were separated from each other
I no longer wish us as two

I want to sleep with you
Under the bright and beautiful stars
I want you to feel good
I want to heal all of you scars

I want to kiss you
When the moon shines above
I want you when you're feeling right
You are as beautiful as a dove

I want to be there
When I say those words to you
When I run my fingers down your back
And tell you, I love you

I want to draw your name
Embedded in the sand
I want it to last forever in my mind
Or even engraved into my hand

I want to sweep you off your feet
I want you to share your love with me
When I confess my love to you
I will make you weak in the knee

When you fall
From being so blown away
I will catch you in mid air
And be there for you every day

I want to be there for you
When you can love me too
So I can look back into your eyes
And say, I love you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Milton

    Great! I feel the same way. Good stuff. ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    Wow very nice, as above very romantic and full of emotion, and also someone above said it didnt flow in places...but when does love or life ever flow well...i think it shows alot of feelings very nicely!!

    Well done

    Jon
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Nice write....very romantic,,,,both of u did a gr8 job..5/5

    luv,
    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenToy

    It's a really good poem. There are some places I feel like it's a bit hard to read, but maybe it's just me. Even so, it's well written and I like it alot. ^_^ *5*

    *BrokenToy