Comments : If Only...

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0mg i dun0o y the l0w v0tez f0r. this was realli g0od a great j0b. very well written a t0uching piece beautifully w0rded. =]

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Straight from the heart... yes, that's where this came from... straight from the heart. If Only I Could... wow, this is one of the most romantic poems I've read on this site. Its so full of love. Incredible job on this Robert. You rock!!!

    Best Wishes
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by cizu - joey chan

    Good one dude... write more ok ^^ though i cant see the rhyme here.. but still.. its damn good ^^ all the best dude

  • 18 years ago

    by ursula

    I love it i love it i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    In the beginning it seems long but once i started reading i couldn't stop... lol amazing poem i love it , it's one of the best i've red in my life ;) just keep writing!

    ~StefQ

  • 18 years ago

    by Does He Love Me 4 Me

    This is so sweet and from your heart

  • 18 years ago

    by jamia

    I did not like this very much a little toooooooooooooo longgggggggggggg

  • 18 years ago

    by .:NOT.so.STRONG:.

    Woow...i dunt even kno wut 2 say! It left me speachless! I'd giv anythin 2 hav a guy who'd b sweet enuff to think or say those types of things! I really loved this poem..Great job!!!

  • A beautiful penned you've done here, so heartfelt yet lovely write. robert, you're just a brilliant....yet have unique style writen. well done!

    love
    gloria's glen.

  • 18 years ago

    by Smiles-All-Around

    Omfg, this poem made me say awe hhaa. good poem its so effing cuute

  • 18 years ago

    by Deandra

    Hey i like you poem alot and i would like for you to read mine and comment please think you keep intuch.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Love it make sure you read mine jk lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    If I had the stars to give, I'd give them all, to you.
    I'd arrange them, in the sky, in words, saying, "I love you."

    exceptionally well written lines!
    loved reading this.

    shobhana

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Absolutely Wondeful.
    Loved these lines:
    "If I had the stars to give, I'd give them all, to you.
    I'd arrange them, in the sky, in words, saying, "I love you." "

    Very romantic... you are an excellent writer!!
    Keep it up, take care and God Bless
    Sarah-Joy

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Her last tear was fatal~

    I DUNNO HOW THE HELL YOU DO IT but you are a amazing writer you make my mouth drop and my eyes tear your ...your..your... jsut ....W-O-W
    -
    mia