You know what, this poem was out of this world. Fantastic!!! You described life's pretends so well, I was amazed.
Excellent job. Keep it up.

Very good man. i can relate to it alot. keep up the good work

Ooo i like this poem dean! its different.
gd job!

A song? That was my first thought. It sounded like a song. Of course the first part had a poem-ish quality that soon became apparent as a song. What type of genre would you classify this under cuz this does sound like it would be a cool song.
~Faith-less

I so love it, a 5/5!! =)

I thought it to be a song as I read it, it was a great piece, with a subject that everyone can relate to. Beautiful!