Thought we were the same

by glass*wall*prison   Mar 29, 2006


You thought we were freinds
well think again
it was all for show just pretend
there will be no mend

this so called freindship is broken
i think it was from the start
this poem is a small token
of who you are at heart

your as gentle as a lamb
when you want to be
but as reckless as a ram
anger blinds you from everything

im sick of this feeling
true love you were my first
what the HELL was i thinking
your immature for all its worth

your beauty is beyond measure
on the inside aswell
something i will no longer treasure
you were my own personal hell

everything im telling you is true
just take a second to listen
something you seldomn do

i thought we were the same
now i know were not
not even the blood in our veins
could wether my distraught

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  • 18 years ago

    by otto

    The first couple of verses captured my attention, I liked how the words went well together,
    The picture you painted with your words was foggy, I could see but not engage upon your words, in other words 'feel' your words,
    the ending I thought there was something missing, not really sure what thought
    I do like how you write, you show lots of promise

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Hey I totally luved this one!!!
    so emotional, I mean in a sad way..I luved how you wrote it. keep writing and welcome to the site. u know your work will be THE BEST when you read others poems, if you needed to read sum ppl's work whom I think they're GREAT, well, just tell me ;)
    keep up this talent
    Much Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Kerstin

    I love this poem. Ita kinda how i feel bout someone. Its awsome. keep it up your good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    I really like your poems they are so kewl!!!! well bye again lol

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