WOO HOO go meg! haha.... lol good poem! would luv to hear more shtuff!! cooment on mine and ill comment on yours! luv ya gurl**

"I know Ive been bad I cant help but sin"
This line kept me reading because i can relate with it so well lol, very good poem...5/5

Not really clear and seem to wander alot on this one...

EXCELLENT JOB!! kind of freaky, because im not into all the depressed stuff... but you still did very well with putting it together and everything... great job!!

**meggie**

Aww..this is so sad.. great job! this poem contained alot of emotion, used good descriptions and language, and flowed well! 5/5