Comments : A Room.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meggie33

    WOO HOO go meg! haha.... lol good poem! would luv to hear more shtuff!! cooment on mine and ill comment on yours! luv ya gurl**

  • 11 years ago

    by Fallengod667

    "I know Ive been bad I cant help but sin"
    This line kept me reading because i can relate with it so well lol, very good poem...5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Not really clear and seem to wander alot on this one...

  • 11 years ago

    by Meggie33

    EXCELLENT JOB!! kind of freaky, because im not into all the depressed stuff... but you still did very well with putting it together and everything... great job!!

    **meggie**

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww..this is so sad.. great job! this poem contained alot of emotion, used good descriptions and language, and flowed well! 5/5