That's the best rictameter I've ever read :] Not at all forced, it just flowed beautifully from your fingertips, I'm sure.

The end = amazing&powerful.

Wonderful Rictameter... The flow was awesome and the language so exquistely written! Glorious work :)

Excellent! So much feeling and passion in so few lines, well done!
I love how you ended it....superb!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

A gr8 poem
its the first rictameter poem I like. lol

Very raw, can almost feel the emotions you felt when you were writing this.
Love it
K x

I like the frankness of this poem which shows courage. There is a fear of rejection that lies inside all of us but usually can't admit to it. Fine writing.