An interesting perspective, i loved the line - 'My body is in the future, while my mind's in the past' well thought out and written, good luck in my contest xx

Nice. i love the determination and the rhyme is fabulous. awesome job!

I love this poem, the ryming and flow is perfectly done, keep writing as I am sure you will take care sarah x

You're right sometimes we can never forget the past or sometimes we get flash backs....so true..I love how your poems are so close to my life!

Good good... nice flow and reely like the title

Again, the use of the derailed train. A great metaphor - it shows disaster and creates a feeling of pity towards the poet from the reader. Awesome poem, the first stanza was excellent.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow, this was really good. i loved ur use of words and descriptions!

5/5 definately
again you've definately evolved in your work but I still like your style and words.
very original
~Wings