Comments : Her Picture

  • 11 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Kind of cliche, but it's beautifully sad , eh, and something many can find themselves relating to.

  • 11 years ago

    by Knee

    OMG!!! wut a poem!
    I was shocked myself by the last stanza!! I hope this will turn to be just a forgetable memory!!
    hope that things will turn to be okay. I really wish u the best. u seem to be a real nice person =)
    Good Luck sweetie
    Much Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x*thanx for the sweet comment on my poem btw*

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenie

    O sweet heart!!!!!!!! what an amazing poem!!! ur on the edge of ur seat...wondering who this picture is of.o baby doll...i pray for u everynight, and i am just soooo sry u, u as a wonderful sister, had to go through such pain, such a disgusting experince from this man!!!!!!! wow...rape...what a deep topic for all women. sis, i am just so glad u r still here, u r not weak, and that u stayed w/ us all!!! i dont no what to say...just always no, i am here, and that`ll NeVeR change!!! stay strong babe!!!!!
    5/5
    jenie..ur lil sis

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachele

    Wow..that made me cry. You've been through a lot in your life. I wish that didn't have to happen to anyone. You're a great writer though. I wish you luck with your life. Great poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    An absolutely awesome poem, so sad and emotional and well written.
    Cant see any faults, its absolutely amazing.
    keep it up
    xxxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    Your poems are always startlingly honest, a quality I love very much in them. You talk about difficult concepts and ideas in your poems and write about them with all the passion and emotion in your being. Rape is a hard difficult subject because it is so common and yet so life altering. No one is ever the same after they have been raped because they loose everything and often punish themselves for the dirty feeling they have that will never go away. I have never been raped, but there is this one guy who has tried several times and lost his nerve when I pleaded no. If this is your past I can not offer complete empathy, but I can offer as much compassion and love as you will let me because you deserve to live again. Poem 5/5.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 11 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome write hun. I loved the picture metaphor..it's different to the usual mirror approach and worked brilliantly.
    This was really heart breaking and im so sorry if it's true.
    I guess that doesn't mean a lot but please know that i am here for you..so whenever it gets to much, learn to share the load.
    Much love sweetie
    xoxox

  • 11 years ago

    by TeRina Waerea

    Sab its terina this is the best poem i love it baby....any ways i wuld hate it if this happened to me or anyone but life gos on...
    xox

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephy

    Wow hunn...thats so sad...it's a really good poem don't get me wrong but still it's worrying(ok i don'tk now if that makes sence in english...as in it got me worried) I really hope you get better...try talking about it?
    much love-xxxx-

  • 11 years ago

    by Ric Hansen

    I read this and i hate my own gender. What a horrible thing...men like this should get the death penalty....We're not all this way; believe me! excellent poem. your awesome.

  • 11 years ago

    by beautyinainstant

    Wow great poem! i know it was hard 4 u to write that poem...but it really good.i hope in your time of need that you feel love...may god be with you to help. i will pray for as one of gods children. i would only hope that you wouldnt cut urself becuz that isnt the answer...~valerie

  • 11 years ago

    by Amanda

    So sad babes, hope you are ok. I'm so busy working at the minute so sorry i havent been in touch. This is a deep, sad poem but very good like always. Take care hun xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Marissa

    OMG!!!!! i love your poem!!
    it is so good!!
    i wish tha i could write like that!!
    i hope that you keep on writting!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Micky

    Great job!!!

    Ps:plz check out my poems and plz make me one of ur favorites ive allready got u

    LOVE
    Micky

  • 11 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    That was really really really good. It reminded me of my best friend and it almost made me cry cuz it's so much like her. And me in some parts. But I really like it. Could you read and rate some of my poems too? I'm still kinda new to this site. Some of them I'd like yo to check out are Suicide, TK, and Me. Thanks Alot!!
    ~Fetz

  • 11 years ago

    by Polly

    Wow awesome poem! I loved the ending although in a way I found it sort of expected. It's written in a beautiful yet sad way, with a lovely flow. I can't relate to the idea of rape, but the horrid pain you go through in the poem is so awful :S
    If this has actually happened to you, woh I don't know what to say it's such an awful thing. Try and stay strong and take care. Keep writing it's a great poem,
    - Polly xx

  • 11 years ago

    by physco

    That was amazing xx5/5xx

  • 11 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Awesome write......really very touching!
    rhyme was perfect and words too. u deserve 10/5

    luv,
    Bharti

  • 11 years ago

    by 1

    Sad but beautifull *5/5*...i hope ur alright...take care

    Noziyna

  • 11 years ago

    by bloodytears15

    Wow i like this poem it really means something to ppl i know it meant something to me.....comment me back
    bloody tears 15