OMG!!! wut a poem!
I was shocked myself by the last stanza!! I hope this will turn to be just a forgetable memory!!
hope that things will turn to be okay. I really wish u the best. u seem to be a real nice person =)
Good Luck sweetie
NemO x0x0x0x0x*thanx for the sweet comment on my poem btw*
O sweet heart!!!!!!!! what an amazing poem!!! ur on the edge of ur seat...wondering who this picture is of.o baby doll...i pray for u everynight, and i am just soooo sry u, u as a wonderful sister, had to go through such pain, such a disgusting experince from this man!!!!!!! wow...rape...what a deep topic for all women. sis, i am just so glad u r still here, u r not weak, and that u stayed w/ us all!!! i dont no what to say...just always no, i am here, and that`ll NeVeR change!!! stay strong babe!!!!!
jenie..ur lil sis
Your poems are always startlingly honest, a quality I love very much in them. You talk about difficult concepts and ideas in your poems and write about them with all the passion and emotion in your being. Rape is a hard difficult subject because it is so common and yet so life altering. No one is ever the same after they have been raped because they loose everything and often punish themselves for the dirty feeling they have that will never go away. I have never been raped, but there is this one guy who has tried several times and lost his nerve when I pleaded no. If this is your past I can not offer complete empathy, but I can offer as much compassion and love as you will let me because you deserve to live again. Poem 5/5.
Awesome write hun. I loved the picture metaphor..it's different to the usual mirror approach and worked brilliantly.
This was really heart breaking and im so sorry if it's true.
I guess that doesn't mean a lot but please know that i am here for you..so whenever it gets to much, learn to share the load.
Much love sweetie
Wow hunn...thats so sad...it's a really good poem don't get me wrong but still it's worrying(ok i don'tk now if that makes sence in english...as in it got me worried) I really hope you get better...try talking about it?
Wow great poem! i know it was hard 4 u to write that poem...but it really good.i hope in your time of need that you feel love...may god be with you to help. i will pray for as one of gods children. i would only hope that you wouldnt cut urself becuz that isnt the answer...~valerie
Ps:plz check out my poems and plz make me one of ur favorites ive allready got u
11 years ago
That was really really really good. It reminded me of my best friend and it almost made me cry cuz it's so much like her. And me in some parts. But I really like it. Could you read and rate some of my poems too? I'm still kinda new to this site. Some of them I'd like yo to check out are Suicide, TK, and Me. Thanks Alot!!
Wow awesome poem! I loved the ending although in a way I found it sort of expected. It's written in a beautiful yet sad way, with a lovely flow. I can't relate to the idea of rape, but the horrid pain you go through in the poem is so awful :S
If this has actually happened to you, woh I don't know what to say it's such an awful thing. Try and stay strong and take care. Keep writing it's a great poem,
- Polly xx