Comments : The other part of me

  • 17 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wonderful love poem. especiall loved these lines:

    My mine and soul are wrapped
    My heart beats in time with yours.

    you might want to check for punctuation errors - this site substitutes something else instead of them!

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammy

    Absolutely beautiful! What a lucky lady :)
    I have only read 2 of your poems & already I can tell I really like the way you write-- from the heart :) I will be reading more for sure!
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    This was really beautiful, shes very lucky to have someone so devoted to her. great write.

  • 17 years ago

    by amandaa

    Omg, that was so cute...nice work.
    And thx for the comment. I'm working on letting go...although it's proving to be alot harder than I thought...but yeah.

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Thanks for your comment on mine. Lol. I think that is such a cute poem!!. Lol. keep writing. it's so sweet.
    ~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I thought this poem was really sweet and I just liked it. Thanks for ur comment. Jpoet*