Comments : X My Glass Ceiling . . .

  • 11 years ago

    by azlan26

    "You gave as a gif to help me"
    need a t
    Very symbolic poem etc sorry hard to focus on much apart from my painful neck rigth now owww....

  • 11 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Helllo!

    Awesome poem, I'm so happy to see talent such as yours keen on joing the Fish Bowl. I'm Jenn the head of the Bowl, and I am here to welcome you to our lovely eco system =) lol okay I cut the lame jokes out now. Lol if you need anything Let me know or the assistants, Fighter or >tornapart. I hope you enjoy your stay, but please do me a favor and read the welcome message and follow the site and club rule =) but most of all HAVE FUN *smiles!*

    Love Jenn

  • 11 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Again I notice that your poetry is changing and yet you maintain that high standard of poetry...good stuff..

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 11 years ago

    by Latasha

    I really like this poem its good it has many meanings which leaves me wondering
    good work!

  • Very well written! I knew it was through but its kinda an inside joke to write it threw! But thank you for commenting! This isnt my favorite poem but it was good! I give you a 5/5!! Keep up the good work!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I like the image of somebody being a glass celieng *I can't spell today lol* and it's very beautiful as always. Different kind of friendship poem. Doe shtis person inspire you though or does the glass celieng stop you? Sorry just confused a bit lol

  • 11 years ago

    by sarah

    Fantastic poem def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 11 years ago

    by Sole

    The glass ceiling stops me - but the person inspires me a lot . . .

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    This poem is very interesting to me it has excellent style and ryhme and i liek the way you wrote it as well. while i dont completely understand the meaning of your metaphor i find it intriuging and that it adds greatly to the poem. all in all 5/5 a truly amazing poem :)
    ~jacob

  • 11 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Well........ it was original. I have no complaints. It was alright, though I did not see the point of it. How can someone be your glass ceiling?

  • 11 years ago

    by Sole

    Ok let me explain . . . I hate to comment on my own poetry - seems so . . selfish!!

    Imagine a room, and you're born on the floor, and as life goes on you look up to where you want to go in life . . and you rise up and up as you grow, but then, you hit something you can't see, the glass ceiling, and you can still look ahead to where your life should be going, but it's not because the glass ceiling - the invisible obstacle, is blocking your path. I hope this helps.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 11 years ago

    by StefQ

    Fist time i didn't understand it too lol but now i do and wow amazing , so wel written and a rhymescheme and not too short =)another 5/5 =) i enjoyed reading it =)

    ~StefQ

  • 11 years ago

    by NannO

    Breath-taking.. i absolutely loved it.. beautiful dedication and most forward emotion.. great job with this one.. short, but says it all.. great rhyme and nice flow.. just all-around fantastic
    keep it up
    5/5 from me
    take care
    NannO

  • 11 years ago

    by PS

    Very nice. i like the glass ceiling. thats something ive never seen that before.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    I really like how you wrote it. it has a really good structure and a really good flow. i like how you ended it. its a different sort of friendship poem. but i love it!

    Kat

  • 11 years ago

    by Adriana

    Wow! I love your style of writing..really i do...I love the way this poem rhymes and flows...great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is a very good peice, not sure why there was all the misunderstanding as i understood your meaning... but usually i miss the meaning of metaphors completly so maybe i just read things in a different way to most lol. anyway, great peice well ritten and portrayed with some good expression

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by David Munoz

    Interesting poem. Didn't get it until the end, but good job wrapping it up. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awww, Well first off it sounds like you have a good friend =]
    But back to the poem, This was really good, Short and simple. Had a good rhyming and flow. I loved it all over. Keep up the great work! 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow! This was an excellent poem, I can relate very well and understand totally where you are coming from!

    "Now I've found the perfect context
    Perfect poem, perfect feeling
    Perhaps you saw it long ago
    But you are my glass ceiling"

    That stanza captivated me so much, I think this poem was incredible! Keep it up! 5/5