Awesome poem, I'm so happy to see talent such as yours keen on joing the Fish Bowl. I'm Jenn the head of the Bowl, and I am here to welcome you to our lovely eco system =) lol okay I cut the lame jokes out now. Lol if you need anything Let me know or the assistants, Fighter or >tornapart. I hope you enjoy your stay, but please do me a favor and read the welcome message and follow the site and club rule =) but most of all HAVE FUN *smiles!*
Very well written! I knew it was through but its kinda an inside joke to write it threw! But thank you for commenting! This isnt my favorite poem but it was good! I give you a 5/5!! Keep up the good work!!
I like the image of somebody being a glass celieng *I can't spell today lol* and it's very beautiful as always. Different kind of friendship poem. Doe shtis person inspire you though or does the glass celieng stop you? Sorry just confused a bit lol
This poem is very interesting to me it has excellent style and ryhme and i liek the way you wrote it as well. while i dont completely understand the meaning of your metaphor i find it intriuging and that it adds greatly to the poem. all in all 5/5 a truly amazing poem :)
Ok let me explain . . . I hate to comment on my own poetry - seems so . . selfish!!
Imagine a room, and you're born on the floor, and as life goes on you look up to where you want to go in life . . and you rise up and up as you grow, but then, you hit something you can't see, the glass ceiling, and you can still look ahead to where your life should be going, but it's not because the glass ceiling - the invisible obstacle, is blocking your path. I hope this helps.
Breath-taking.. i absolutely loved it.. beautiful dedication and most forward emotion.. great job with this one.. short, but says it all.. great rhyme and nice flow.. just all-around fantastic
keep it up
5/5 from me
This is a very good peice, not sure why there was all the misunderstanding as i understood your meaning... but usually i miss the meaning of metaphors completly so maybe i just read things in a different way to most lol. anyway, great peice well ritten and portrayed with some good expression
Awww, Well first off it sounds like you have a good friend =]
But back to the poem, This was really good, Short and simple. Had a good rhyming and flow. I loved it all over. Keep up the great work! 5/5