Emotional Storm

by Kaylee   Apr 4, 2006


Raining. Streaming.
Lazy summer days slipping through my hands.
Precious life tingling through my
veins then draining from the emptiness.
Cold drink resting in your hand
with sunglasses falling down your nose.
Tanned skin and flashing grin.
It’s gone.

Burning. Kissing.
Passion leading me down the broken road.
Trees lying on the ground.
Thorns pricking my fingers. Bleeding rose.
Time ticking with every breath I take.
With every breath you lost.
Wheat colored hair.
It’s gone.

Scratching. Crying.
Drowning from the loneliness. Holding my breath.
Slipping beneath crashing
waves of deception.
Emotional pattern changing.
Mountains restricting my view
of the angel made land of hidden valley.
Love missing.
It’s gone.

Bitter. Delicious.
Tasting the ocean salt as the waves rise and fall.
Sun setting upon the beach
splashing colors on the turquoise water.
Sighing relief. The remnants of
the hurricane of loss winding down.
You’re not here anymore.
You’re gone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I've read this poem before, and i loved it then and still love it now, xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by David Munoz

    4 feelings, 1 poem, 1 very good writer. The four snapshots thing works well. Very good job of conveying each.

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    I wish I could use imagery in my poems the way you do. I can only do it if I'm writing a short story

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Anita

    Wow that was a really good keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem was absolutely beautiful. The way you described everything was very talented. great job.