Feeling of Free

by Juls   Apr 4, 2006


Not visible to the forsaken eye

Unable to see the truth,
that was lied before their eyes

Hidden, like an animal in the night

Searching in light, but still
cant be seen before their sight

Numb from the truth that might hurt

That is how you are, how you feel
Just as it is getting kicked in dirt

Will they ever know who you miss?

A broken heart you hold for a loved one, a companion that has been with you

They are blind, they will never see

Feeling locked, caged in.
Anything else but the feeling of free.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Feeling locked, caged in.
    Anything else but the feeling of free.
    [I loved those lines. They were really good! Also a great way to end the poem!]

    I thought the way you opened up the poem was great. It was a great poem from start to finish. Nothing I would change at all. Keep it up! You're a great writer!!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 11 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Oooh i really like ur poems! that one was very effective, the layout and wording was great! 5/5 xxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Fighter

    Stunning!!! wow.... im in awe. you truly are talented. keep up the phenomenal work!
    -xXx-

  • 11 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Juls,

    This is bloody amasing, the swtich of style the flow, the subject this is all blowing this fish out of the water! wow babe, wow. I'm so proud of you, you really turing into the poet your ment to be. Never give it up like me. This is frikken ace!!!!!

    Jenn

    Ps: Fave part

    Not visible to the forsaken eye

    Unable to see the truth,
    that was lied before their eyes

    Hidden, like an animal in the night

    Searching in light, but still
    cant be seen before their sight