This is bloody amasing, the swtich of style the flow, the subject this is all blowing this fish out of the water! wow babe, wow. I'm so proud of you, you really turing into the poet your ment to be. Never give it up like me. This is frikken ace!!!!!
Ps: Fave part
Not visible to the forsaken eye
Unable to see the truth,
that was lied before their eyes
Hidden, like an animal in the night
Searching in light, but still
cant be seen before their sight