That's so sweet...beautiful poem...5/5

......................my, my, my.............................

Hey darling beautifully w0rded. a t0uching piece i dun0 y its been v0ted s0 l0w. this was really g0od, keep it up. great use 0f w0rds

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

So lovely yet beautiful penned............

If I had a dollar for every poem of yours that I fell in love with...

Absolutely beautiful!

Give me wings of love to make me fly
Let me soar above higher and higher
Show me heaven here on earth
Come on closer and feed my desire

I love that stanza! Brilliant!!

love and best wishes,
Mary

This is a touching one-again. It says it all.

lots of love and
god bless

Wow what a lovely poem!!!! you're a real inspiration to me!!!

I love reading your poems!

5/5 for sure

Thanks for your comments!!!!!
I will try to come up with more

Ali

Kiss me now till I feel you in my blood
Give me the sensation found so rare
Drown me in your eyes till I cant rise above
Show me how much you can love and care

Give me wings of love to make me fly
Let me soar above higher and higher
Show me heaven here on earth
Come on closer and feed my desire

this one is a greedy poem of your's sweety...lol...lol, and i just loved it. Great poem all the way through.

would love to be a part of your journey to fantasy land.. :o))

all the best and take care

Congratulations for reaching the top so soon dear, time has come again but then who counts..huh!!! lol

take care

Wut a sweet poem pictured love desired in every line with such melody i can fly.
love

Wow...I'm really impressed with this poem! I love your descriptions and the way your feelings show through. A lot of people can relate to this and know exactly how you feel.

If you could, check out my poem 'Your Love' and r/r/c...I'd greatly appreciate it!

Thanks
~Kelly~

Wow! that was lovely. it carries so many feelings.....
keep it up! 5/5

I love this poem and its conept, flow, decription- love it

I really love it.there is so much emotion check ours out

Wonderful, Enjoyed the write Michelle, lovely and romantic!!!

That poem is so cute!! i really liked it! 5/5 for sure! thanx again for commenting on mine. it means a lot to get comments on something you write.

Lovely Michelle. this one is filled with passion and so much warmth.

well done!

love and peace
shobhana

I love it....I always enjoy your writting. You are one of my top favorites and I look forward to reading more.