Comments : Sweet Amy Cried

  • 11 years ago

    by PS

    Wow that actually brought tears to my eyes. esp the last little verse. it is so touching. amazing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sole

    So sad - a great contrast to the first part, and a reakky great structure. I'm in tears!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 11 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    It can only get better....will there be a part 3?

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 11 years ago

    by Patrick

    O, wow, how sad. Very beautifully written and great structure. You almost got me to cry which is really hard, I nearly never cry.

    5/5, West

  • 11 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    Wow another great poem to read and it flows on from the first very well! i hope to be reading a third poem following on
    great job
    jemma xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by StefQ

    Omg you made me speechless in a positive way though :) this one is so sad but als has a good structure like said above :) also i liked the ending, while througout the whole poem says :"Sweet amy do not cry.", it ends with:"Sweet amy cried." excellent poem once again :) i can't wait till part 3 :)
    5/5

    ~StefQ

  • 11 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    Great following up poem i can't wait for the third one. I loved this one it was great

    awesome write

    ~GLASS~

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow I loved this one too. Speshly cause i love ballet!! But it was a good poem lol I hope to see part 3 very soon, Unless you've already done it lol

    luv natalie x-x

  • 11 years ago

    by Laura

    This poem was great...relly god sequel.
    Ilike this poem because Amy's illness and harships can really symbolize the difficulties we all face in life.

    Let me know when you have part 3 completed becuz I would really enjoy reading it...I just know it willbe just as great as the first couple!

  • 11 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written. very clear story thoughout and a brilliant ending

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    I liked the way it ended, i'm glad it wasnt a sad ending. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha

    I don't know what to comment. It doesn't have the same power the first part did. It wasn't bad, poor, or fair. It was good. But I don't think it was excellent. Close, but no cigar. Or whatever you want to call it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome poem. I loved it. very good follow up to the first. The flow was awesome. you are a very good writer. keep up the amazing work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ûµ.Autumn.Ûµ

    I love your poems. they are so descriptive and have the perfect vibe. Keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Emma

    Amazing...i loved it...i am simply speachless...nice job...
    Emma 5/5
    i cant wait for the third part....

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Another awesome poem, keep writing such great poems.
    I love your work
    love Tara-Kay

  • 11 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great write.. its so sad.. i loved it 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 11 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great write.. its so sad.. i loved it 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 11 years ago

    by littlballa

    Once again, touching almost brought tears to my eyes i also love the repetion it makes the poem a lot better

  • 11 years ago

    by amber

    I cant wait till the third part you are a great poet very descriptive it is wonderful good job