Omg you made me speechless in a positive way though :) this one is so sad but als has a good structure like said above :) also i liked the ending, while througout the whole poem says :"Sweet amy do not cry.", it ends with:"Sweet amy cried." excellent poem once again :) i can't wait till part 3 :)
I don't know what to comment. It doesn't have the same power the first part did. It wasn't bad, poor, or fair. It was good. But I don't think it was excellent. Close, but no cigar. Or whatever you want to call it.