Somebody can actually write. Thank goodness for that. I've found maybe five people who can write and in my opinion should keep writing. The only thing I didn't like was that you have lower case i's. Sorry, personaly thing. Other than that, remarkable organization and word choice.

You have got to be one of the best writters I have had the pleasure of reading work by. all your peices are fantastic, most seem pretty unique (even though you claim that you're style is not) the word usage and content brilliant and the structure and progression flawless, and this peice is no exception.

5/5

I love the kind of chaucer language you've used here. I'm not sure that's the right word for it but I liked this poem. It had originality and flair!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

"Forsooth, like sand within a sieve, time reigns" time is a ruler and can't be stopped...very emotional...
The last two lines were also amazing
Excellent

Deep. It's hard to understand, but read it through a few times, and it begins to come to shape. In agreement with Kaylee, I dislike the lower case i's and god (who should have a capital G)but the meaning is thorough.

Peace. [Sole]

You have some of the most professional poetry i have read on this site. your language seems to almost age the poem. the idea of not wasting life waiting for death. an exellent poem!

Ruby

I have to admit it took me a few times to read this poem over before truly understanding it... who know's maybe I still dont :) But from what i did understand this was very deep and your poetry really amazes me. You truly seem like you have been writing forever. Maybe you have? Really good meaning... Great job again

You are one of some talented writers on this website awesum job....your writing is different to anything ive ever read and in a very good way

*~CrImSon__TeArS~*

Very deep and thought provoking. Your use of original words makes it a delight to read. My full attention was captured from beginning to end. Flow was exceptional and again I like the mix of words used to rhyme. Enjoyable read!

I have to agree with everyone else, you really are quite obviously one of only a few truely masterful poets on this site. So deep and provocative you never fail to amaze me and leave me in awe, truely fantastic 5/5 x

Excellent writing. Deep and well thought out. It's a bit hard to understand at first glance, but comes to light as you read it more throughly the second time around. Great write!! 5/5

Wow...you should definitly keep writing...your amazing! this poem is so good. i have to admit...i read it through a couple times...but i love it. another deep and complex peice...yoor vocab is amazing. 5/5.