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  • 11 years ago

    by The Black Angel Lloyd Rose

    Awesome. 'nuff said. 5/5

  • Brilliant write. i really like your flow and style, it's unique. some wonderful imagery, beautifully dark and bewitching. awsome job, keep it up!

    take care
    -hannah

  • 11 years ago

    by PS

    Very good. i like.

  • 10 years ago

    by Rocky

    I loved how dark it was. and how it created a story in my mind. good poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Although I'm not really fond of non-rhyming poems, I actually enjoyed this one! I think it was because of the imagery and wording. My favourite lines were:
    "A voice murmurs into dimness"
    and
    "A silken voice floats up in harmony"
    --- lovely choice of words.

    5/5

    P.S.: I'd really appreciate it if you could check out some of my poems when you have some spare time =)

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem thanks for your comment on my poem "Death's way

  • 10 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    First off, thank you very much for the great lengthy comment. It is much appreciated, and tells me everything about what you think, lol it is probably the longest one I've had but the best by far. Plus this poem right here, I can see throughout it a scene of this happening from start to finish. The details in it not a lot, but makes myself think of more of it, even after I have finished reading it.

  • 10 years ago

    by jason

    Very interesting different then any poem i ever read really.. i give it a 5/5 it was a really good poem

  • 10 years ago

    by DAYLON

    Thank you for commenting on my work, also keep up the good poetry you do aswell. Take care :)

  • 10 years ago

    by DAYLON

    Thank you for commenting on my work, also keep up the good poetry you do aswell. Take care :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is a good poem...the flow was good..

    although i think it would read better if you changed the word "fell" to fall ..in the first line.... because its past tense and the rest of the poem is present tense.

    but overall this is pretty good.

  • 10 years ago

    by jackie

    Wow i really liked it 5/5
    nice work

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Great poem, it is short but still very powerful, I enjoyed reading it.You created effective and really incredible rhythm with just few words, I like the wording too and you expressed emotions excellently! Well done!

  • 10 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Love it keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Very nice write.. the structure and flow was good. The use of grammar would make this poem even better imo.. just my 2cents worth.. great job.. keep them coming