It's really thought provoking. I didn't get most of it until the ending. I think it's how we create problems because we can't solve our inner demons and then blame someone else only to pass them along to our children. Maybe? Anyway, I don't know much about the title. But the rest of it was pretty good. I think the short lines added much more effect then the longer ones, but that's just me.

Sorry about the delay by the way :)

I really liked this poem, i had to read it twice! the language is beautiful and i love the subtle rhyming.

tired arms
and tired minds
refuse to rest
>
tired lies
and tired mouths
refuse to sleep

these lines really help to break up the poem, but at the same time they help it to flow as well!
the message it expressed beautifully :) xx