Woh, you've got talent 5/5

I like this it is really good.... different from what i read and you caught my attetion ... good work

Ahh its soo sad.. :( but its still really great.. an enjoyable read.. the flow was great as well as the rhyme except for in stanza 5 the last line is weird because its said backwards.. and it makes the rhyme seem very forced

This was so very sad, yet such a wonderful read.
The emotion behind the words are clear for all to see.
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and I thought it flowed very well.

Again this has a lot of emotion and flows very well. i like how your poems are different from most peoples.

This is beautiful
i loved reading this
5/5
good thought to it
hurts doesnt it

love
amy
ps-check out my poem murder or suicide..comment & vote pls.. & i'll return the favour

Aww sad poem, but very well written. i can relate to this. amazing job on it! it flowed really nicely and i dont see anything wrong with it 5/5

~Kristina

Marcella, wat can i say. this poem made me think. i am speechless. i can say tho it is perfect!

5/5 def! David

I love how its short but still makes a good point and its still good writing! nice work.

Great for sure. Well written and the simple free verse style is beautiful. Another 5/5 tc

This is one of my favorite pieces that I've read from you. Very emotional and sad yet beautifully written.

Hey, great poem, seems everyone agrees :)

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