Just The Same

by Cella Bella   Apr 8, 2006


Look at all these losers
You'll find them everywhere
They're messed up and annoying
Yet, somehow you seem to care

You can see that they are hurting
But, you laugh anyway,
Disposing their feelings
But they'd befriend you any day

You break down their confidence
In a search to find your own...
You see, you're just the same
You fear the thought of being alone

Copyright 2000 Marcella
*I wrote this in 8th grade, for english class.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Amazing to see the subject, while being annoyed at those 'losers', actually is concerned for them. How he seemed to perceive his surroundings actually reflects and reveals his real character -- a loser. In just a few words, you managed to encompass so much truth and lucidity. I adored it. Lovely work, as always! 5/5 ~Marian

  • 17 years ago

    by Dawn Manna

    Another wonderful poem...ur a great writer....keep up the amazing work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom

    Very good and very true

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Again, this is so true! it flowed well, and i like how the rhymes weren'y forced. great job, ur an amazing writer!!

  • 17 years ago

    by broken reflection

    I enjoyed this poem because it captured human-nature... keep it up 5/5