Comments : I wish

  • 17 years ago

    by Ren

    Awww! I'm so sorry if that's what you're going through. I know it must hurt. Good luck and I loved your poem! Hang in there... If you ever need to talk, I am here.

    Much love!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ren

    Oh, and Thank you for the comment on my poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Angelina

    This is great. im amazed by your writing. and if you went through this, im sorry you had to....i've been through stuff like that too..but it always ends up okay....good job girl!

  • 15 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Great poem keep it up. i loved it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An honest write here with a lovely, unforced flow that I enjoyed reading.
    Wouldn't it be easier, sometimes, if the rest of the world would just disappear?
    A sad piece, but well written.
    All the very best,
    Ben