Comments : A Sepulchre

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Excellent job, great descriptions

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I liked this poem your word usage is amazing...
    Thanks so much for your very kind comment on m ypoem
    much appreciated
    ~Em

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonley prince

    Poetry of this nature is not my cup of tea
    but this was quite good

  • 16 years ago

    by See Through Silouette

    Not so great.
    I think it felt somewhat emotionless and like your trying to make it feel deep and dark but it just seem over worked.
    On your way though.