Door Number 3

by David Munoz   Apr 12, 2006


Life is a game
A vast series of doors
Each changes your path
And what your future stores

A trio of doors is placed before you
Labeled one through three
Each containing a different person
But only one contains me

Door number one contains the average Joe
Nothing special, but that's okay
The one who gives love instead of money
And listens to what you say

Door number two contains "Mr. Perfect"
Good looks, money, he has it all
Buying you the pleasures of the world
Placing pillows to catch you when you fall

Door number three contains me
Literally the odd ball out
There beside you if you need me
A promise you can believe without doubt

It contains one of whom you're not ashamed
And yet always keep him hidden away
Afraid and yet wanting
Full of words but with nothing to say

All of these doors lead to happiness
But no one can tell you which to choose
But never forget that no matter what
This is a friendship you will never lose

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    The idea of behind this poem is excellent and it is very well writen though i do have a teeny tiny suggestion... in the 2nd stanza -

    'A trio of doors is placed before you
    Labeled one through three'

    i think this would be better as -

    'A trio of doors is before you
    Labeled one, two and three'

    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    Hmm.,...this was an interesting...but good poem..I like the way u put it together...good job!
    Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Its different and i love that. and i do like this poem. its sweet flows well. nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Door number three contains one of whom you're not ashamed
    This lines runs a bit long.

    A different sort of poem. I like the idea of having to chose behind doors and the different types of people out there. The title stood out too which I loved. Again, your poems really are good if not better. Maybe go more in depth with this one but other than that great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by David Munoz

    This poem is kinda cheesy, but it gets the point across. Not one of my best works, but maybe you disagree. Please vote/Comment. Thanks in Advance

Read All Comments (5)

More Poems By David Munoz