Comments : Door Number 3

  • 18 years ago

    by David Munoz

    This poem is kinda cheesy, but it gets the point across. Not one of my best works, but maybe you disagree. Please vote/Comment. Thanks in Advance

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Door number three contains one of whom you're not ashamed
    This lines runs a bit long.

    A different sort of poem. I like the idea of having to chose behind doors and the different types of people out there. The title stood out too which I loved. Again, your poems really are good if not better. Maybe go more in depth with this one but other than that great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Its different and i love that. and i do like this poem. its sweet flows well. nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    Hmm.,...this was an interesting...but good poem..I like the way u put it together...good job!
    Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    The idea of behind this poem is excellent and it is very well writen though i do have a teeny tiny suggestion... in the 2nd stanza -

    'A trio of doors is placed before you
    Labeled one through three'

    i think this would be better as -

    'A trio of doors is before you
    Labeled one, two and three'

    xx