Comments : A year ago...

  • 17 years ago

    by dezi

    You expressed your feelings so well through your words. 5/5 awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    Hehe, and is there any surprise that you won the contest . . . amazing poem, I can relate almost exactly, so well thought out, the structure, flow, everything just works!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    You can really feel the emotion in this one, and thats what poetry is all about. good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really like the way that you ended this poem. Great job. I'm sure that many people can relate to this (in some way) It's really nicely written & the flow is good & it keeps rhythm well. great job! 5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Another poem of stunning quality, of love and love's loss. What is clear to me reading your poetry is the true depth of the emotion that you feel when you place pen to paper (or fingers to keys...) a sense of hope that pervades everything you write. Truely magnificent 5/5 x

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Your words are beautiful. You did well with the year ago and the year waiting. Your final line draws the most attention as it leaves us wanting to know what would come in that year. Your words wash over the reader and leaves them wanting more. And I know that because I've read a couple of your poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good use of words. But in my critique, you can still work on the flow. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    That last stanza was really good. And also the poem was probablly easy for alot of poeple to relate to. I can relate a little bit. But, The poem itself, Was just brillant. Another awesome piece. Keep up the good work, 5/5

    `taleeee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. that is so sweet.. and sad.. this contained so much emotion and you really shared your feelings with us.. i loved this!

    Yet you took me pass the limit.
    ^ here i think you meant "past" not "pass" but maybe im mistaken :)

    excellent write! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Joy

    Ooh liked this one too.

    A year is such a long time isn't it?

    joy*:.xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Loved it! The title was catchy, and the poem alternated between several emotions, like you were actually there, then looking at it,..aww, so nice!

    //T.L.//

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawna

    This is sad!! Such emotion and vulnerability. It is the hardest thing to open up to someone and let yourself be vulnerable!! Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow you really did express everything well... nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    That was beautiful! I loved your word choice! The flow was really good. I can relate a lot to this. You put a great deal of emotion into this, which always makes the readers want to keep reading. You did a wonderful job!

    Cayce x

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I love the way u write this one! i feel the emotion and i was thinking im the one who saying all this things. actually i can truly relate this poem coz i was remember someone in my past well,,,, great written keep up the good work5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Overall, I like your style, I want to read on and I don't get bored halfway through. The flow was a bit rocky, but it doesn't really affect the content, or the message. Really well done, mature and concise.

  • 17 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    Thank you very much for the comment
    and i absolutely adore this poem, I can relate to it so much!!!
    a definite 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww. so sweet and longing yet sad. neva give up hope hun

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A nice poem. a good conclusion as well. A story of sadness and love and letting go even when you don't want to. This was very well done and a very nice write. So simple and you just state it like it is.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I liked the ending. and your style. i loved the emotion in it!