Comments : Through My Window

  • 11 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Im speechless. it was so good!!

  • 11 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I dont know what to say! this is so beautiful, you are so talented. i LOVE the last line, and the way that you hint at your own problems, but still your own contentedness, its so beautiful, but so sad, and i'm getting muddled up! i usually only like sad poems, but this is so amazing, i've bookmarked it..(that means alot). thank you so much for writing something so .. beautiful!

    keep writing

    Lonelynow xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    You've captured the essence of everyone having problems very nicely. Look around and there's always those less fortunate than ourselves. Great write.

  • 11 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Aww that reallly sad =[
    but amazingly good you have an amazing talent!
    great work ,keep it up
    5/5
    loveloev
    Alice
    xxxx
    &&thanks for yuor comment =]

  • 11 years ago

    by *~Brittaney~*

    Wow...this is one of the best poems i have ever read and its so truthful very awesome.also thank you for your comment *~Brittaney*~

  • 10 years ago

    by Mr M

    Very astute and well written...

  • 9 years ago

    by InvisibleHourglass

    Through my window, I can see
    A world that isn't pleasing me

    My favorite line. Ever. It was wonderful and hooked me from the start. Sometimes all we can do is watch, with eyes and thoughts behind windows.

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    WOW! This is absolutely a stunning write and I'm adding this to my faves. I like its simplicity and its heart-touching message.