Wow. Impressive . . I think I can relate. Very well written, flow was great, and you chose your words expertly.

Peace. [Sole]

Short but im not sure if you really do well at getting to the point, but then again, not all poetry has to be so clear, so nice job anyways.... guess its just not what i was expecting as an ending as i read lol...

I can relate to this poem & I know the feeling all to well. I think you did a great job at expressing your emotions. & I love the way you used similes to describe how you felt. Great job! 5/5*

What I especially liked about this poem was the way you used rhyming sparsely to achieve a sense of rythym rather than being a slave to your own devices. I think this gives the poem (which suitably is about flow) a great feel. Really eloquently expressed, beautiful 5/5 x

Nice job, great similie

It was really good, even though I enjoy reading rhyming poems better.

I liked this part:

My true feelings about you,
Flowed like a river of the wild.

You are really talented. 5/5

Great poem!! I usually like reading poems that rhyme but you made it enjoyable to read this type to!!! You are truley talented!! 5/5!!

It's really beautiful concept but a tad bit repetitive. Maybe go into more detail about what you are trying to say instead of tryin ot change the words to what you are saying if that makes sense. You repeat flowed twice in one stanza and true feeling is the same as true emotions as wells so maybe take a deep look inside yourself and see what you find even if you don't like it. Hopefully you just take these as suggestions.

It was a little short, But still good. The 2 middles stanza really brought out the poem, Thought they were great. 5/5

`taleee xx

Very nice written! I love the way how you expressed yourself in this poem. Keep up the good work!

Niiiiiice i liked it

“Lo, Great poem, once again! I really like the last stanza, you do a really good job of actually finishing a poem, not just leaving it hanging, like so many, including myself do.
Well done, Love
~she Died Screaming

Love the poem. It painted a good painting in my head... 5/5

~Shae

I thought this was really cute, particularly the imagery.
You have lots of talent, so keep writing.

I liked this, but I didn't really understand the meaning of it. You did have some good lines though, good work.

--steph

This is a good poem..i dont really like reading poems that dont ryhme but i enjoyed this one...good job!

I liked how you rhymed in this poem & the imagry was beautiful! i liked it alot

I like how you didn't rhyme in this poem. It let you say a ton of great things. I enjoy the huge amount of passion you incorporate into your poetry, it makes for excellent pieces. 5/5.

Wow.. your good choices of words is really powerful.. I could feel the emotions.. the love.. really good.. keep up the good work 5/5

Overll good job, I liked the flow of the poem, nice imagery.