Comments : If I Could

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Another masterpeace! i am speachless

    5/5 says it all :D

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Good one, comparing lvoe to nature is always good. i have poem callwd IF I could , iwould..check it out..agi nthe best ive read by you yet.

    Lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Erin

    That was really good 5/5. added u to my favorites. check my poems out if u want. keep writting ur very talented.

  • 17 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    "moon" and "soon" seemed a little too forced.
    But that was a good poem actually,
    I was just trying to find some advice.
    keep up the good work!
    your poems are really great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    I really really love this poem, A definite 5.. I can relate to it almost too well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emma Brown

    Very expressive poem, I love it =)
    5/5, love Emma xx

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very sweet. i enjoyed this outlook on it. Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Again with the feeling keep on writing awsome poems!

    ~king Drake

  • 16 years ago

    by Behind Blue Eyes

    It's simple and sweet; pure and cute

    i love it!