Comments : The letter to end my pain

  • 17 years ago

    by rubberduckii

    Hey,
    Omigosh, I love it!!! It's so...true. I know that some of my friends have gone through stages of their life where this is exactly how they felt. n i guess i have too but you jus make it all work, very good hun. one question though...from your own experiences/feelings or jus one heck of a good guess? ANYWAYS, keep writing and i will keep reading, promise.

  • 17 years ago

    by TrueLovesVictim

    It was a very sad but a great poem...i can tell you were in a lot of pain...words were right and must have took a while to wright this...great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexis

    "were the voices took over
    blade marks on my skin
    painful eating disorders
    i could never win"

    those are my favourite lines.
    this poem is amazing. =)