I loved it...strong meaning...nice job....Great Write...
Emma 5/5

Wow excellent poem! I really loved this one. Keep up your great work! 5/5

Wow the last line was really special like you can embrace words :o
Some of the rhyming in this poem was a bit off...but it didnt matter too much because the poem was excellent

Aw, that's such a nice poem. Very encouraging for sure. Although a bit short, it holds a good meaning. Great job Linz.

I must agree..it wasnt particularly complex but the very essence of emotion behind it made it sparkle.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Beautiful poem.. very inspirational, tho it starts out sad at the beginning... i loved its ending.. ur rhyme and ur flow went reli well.. it was reli short, but u speaked wat was on ur mind prett well..
take care
NannO

I could really feel your emotion in this one..I can relate, very much!! it was beautiful!

This is really good. A very strong poem. Great job on this but on the last line of the first stanza it reads:
And it has helped my along the way.
I think that you mean "me along the way", just thought I'd bring that to your attention. But this is a really good poem. Great job on this! Keep it up!

Nice, it had a stong meaning.. and its definitly the best out of the 3.. that i have read keep it up 5/5

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~!*Meaghen~!*

Wonderful Poem. I love it, words that mean alot. Great Write. :))))

Wow i like this alot its flowed well and it was just awesome 5/5